Squid Who Loves Diving
March Summary and a Plea for Guaranteed Monthly Tickets (Chapter Updated)
The hidden reason is, what's the point of writing a summary that you can't ask for leave for?
Well, I can still ask for a monthly ticket, summarize, and improve. So, let's write it anyway.
In terms of writing in March, I made some adjustments, mainly in two aspects:
First, the adjustment of immersion. When Shang Jianyao has no inner thoughts and the whole team is acting together, it would contradict the overall situation to completely highlight the protagonist and put the immersion on Shang Jianyao. It would feel awkward to write. My solution is to put the vision in God's perspective, give the sense of immersion to the group as a whole, and then let Shang Jianyao serve as the comedian, no, to highlight the bright colors.
Second, after some foreshadowing in the early stage, I appropriately released some suspenseful characters and plots, so that the tension of the plot gradually tightened.
After these two adjustments, compared with the previous chapters, the feeling of reading in March has improved. I can also write the individual actions of the team members with relish.
There are also two things to do in April:
First, clarify the team's main mission a bit more and set up the subsequent action goals. This is an important part of supporting the plot's tension.
Second, the connection and corresponding expression of some previous content. This is the focus of the third part and also a writing problem. I'm quite uneasy about whether it can achieve the expected effect. I hope I can write it as well as possible. Anyway, I'm saying it vaguely, for fear of spoilers.
Finally, the chapter has been updated in advance, please vote for the guaranteed monthly ticket~