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Summary of Plot Design for the 00/01 Season and 01/02 Season!
Then, let's talk about the plot arrangements for these two seasons.
Yes, that's right. In Qiao's outline, these two seasons were originally arranged as one season's plot. Therefore, many careful children may have noticed that in these two seasons, Qiao basically skipped unimportant games and only focused on the key points.
So now let's talk about the first question.
Why did Qiao design these two seasons like this when designing the outline last year?
Well, some children who are still raising the book and haven't had time to savor it should stop reading, because the following content will directly involve spoilers for these two seasons.
1. From the perspective of the overall layout of "Da Tie" (Striking Iron), as early as Su Feng's rookie season, Qiao had already given many readers a psychological expectation, that is, in my book, there will not be 20 seasons, and 20 championships will all belong to Su Feng.
Because for a novel that has to write in detail about 20 seasons, that's called nonsense and irresponsibility, which will only make this book die faster and end prematurely.
And here, dear readers, please don't disbelieve me. Let me give you an example...
As we all know, "Wai Gua" (Cheat/External Aid) had always had good results before Qiao became ill, but, pay attention! Before I became ill, "Wai Gua" actually had a subscription collapse once, that is, when Lin Yi scored 100 points.
So why did the subscription collapse after Lin Yi scored 100 points?
The reason is very simple, because it was too exaggerated, the plot could not be substituted, and it was detached from reality, resulting in distortion!
After all, even if I write the 100 points reasonably, at that time, because Lin Yi was close to completing the dynasty, after he scored 100 points, even if some readers who like a certain Lu style would say it was very cool, most rational genuine readers would not think so.
And this also caused the situation that after Qiao recovered from his illness, he could only use the outline to explain the last few seasons of Lin Yi's career. Because writing in detail at that time would be simply water injection, and secondly, readers could no longer have any expectations for the subsequent plot.
After all, if your protagonist is invincible to the point of rushing out of the universe, then what am I still reading?
Therefore, after learning from the experience and lessons of "Wai Gua", coupled with the fact that "Da Tie" is still a large pattern of the NBA for a full 20 years, and it has to be guaranteed in a relatively detailed way in the later stage, then as the God in Su Feng's time and space, Qiao has to lay the groundwork in the outline and detailed outline.
First of all, what makes me feel more happy is that although this kind of writing is difficult, most of the readers give me feedback that they feel more motivated to read it. And this kind of feedback has also greatly boosted Qiao's fighting spirit in January through subscriptions. The entire January, as of now, can you believe that Qiao, who has encountered various situations in the second half of the year, has updated 150,000 words? To be honest, I myself can't believe it.
And here, I would also like to answer a question that arises every time, from trainees, apprentices, disciples, and a very small number of big shots, that is, is the arrangement of these two seasons a bit deliberate?
So now the question is, in reality, why didn't the "Lakers Second Dynasty" win the third championship? Why didn't Durant and the Warriors win the third championship together? So are these two failures to win the third championship also because reality is too deliberate?
Just like what some old readers who followed me from "Wai Gua" said in the chapter reviews (please take your seats), why is it difficult for a dynasty team in the third year, because if you want to establish a dynasty, it often means that you have to play all the games in these three years. Therefore, considering that there will also be the Olympic Games in 2000, how much rest time is left for some core players of the Raptors in a year?
Therefore, is such an injury accidental? No, it is inevitable.
Secondly, just like I arranged for Iverson to suffer from Jones' fracture, why did Iverson miss the last two months of the 01/02 season? It is because in order to conform to the reality that Jones' fracture often recurs in the second and third years. (So are there any accidents in reality? That is, after encountering Jones' fracture, it recovers quickly and recovers 100%? The answer is very regrettable, no. Because many athletes' injuries, even if they are not Jones' fractures, are repeated, such as the more famous ankle of the elementary school student, and Klay's Achilles tendon.)
But why is it not deliberate to arrange it for Iverson, but deliberate for Xiao O'Neal?
And then there are Carter's injuries in these two consecutive years. To be honest, if I hadn't been merciful in my book, then Carter would have been taken back by God for at least 20% of his talent by now, right? However, in reality, Carter has not played so many games at this stage. In addition, the plot of the stepping, based on Popovich's character, his retaliatory behavior is just a design I made to conform to his personality.
After all, basketball novels are also realistic fanfics. I can't deliberately change their personalities because of some of my own private goods and preferences for someone, right?
In fact, even today, the personalities of Kobe, McGrady, Iverson, and others are the personalities that I have researched their biographies and experiences in reality.
Moreover, winning the championship without injury is not called deliberate, and not winning the championship after encountering some accidents is called deliberate... Then what kind of plot is not deliberate?
And this point, from the subscriptions, the feedback from many big shots is very obvious. That is, after these two seasons, on the contrary, the readers who have been following it all the way and prefer the rational style have begun to firmly believe that I will completely explain Su Feng's 20-season professional career.
In addition, let me also reply to a trainee who said that I was repeating the plot by injecting water for two seasons... To be honest, I didn't want to answer this question at first, but because I was very happy when I saw his comment, I decided to answer it. So why was Qiao so happy?
Because... the comment he posted yesterday, when I saw it today, not only did it not have a single like, but even had a bunch of readers patiently pointing out the important content of these two seasons to him below, but because some of the replies below involved personal attacks, in order to save this kid's face, Qiao simply deleted that floor and answered him here.
First of all, from a structural point of view, these two seasons need to serve the big plot in the summer of 03. Therefore, as long as you carefully read the plot of these two seasons, you will find that Qiao revealed the word "growth" between the lines in these two seasons.
Su Feng is growing, with being defeated, his mentality is growing, his skills are growing, his strength and his increasingly strong one-versus-many ability on the court, and these, through three consecutive 60+, through three quarters of 60+, through a single quarter of 30+, I have carried out a lot of detailed writing, and because I am afraid that some readers will feel too exaggerated, I also carried out various gif illustrations (it is understood that only the Qidian App can see the gif pictures).
In addition, Su Feng's opponents are also growing... For example, McGrady's growth, the relationship between Kobe and O'Neal, Kidd's negative emotions, and then you come to me and say that I have injected water for two seasons? Wake up, if I really injected water for two seasons, then why don't I just win the championship in these two seasons, and then end it on the spot?
Moreover, now at Qidian, as long as the author dares to inject water, the most direct reaction is a drop in subscriptions.
But to be honest, the subscriptions that fell because of Qiao's various situations during the two consecutive championships, on the contrary, have risen back after the end of these two seasons, so, are you very angry now that you know the truth? Do you feel that you couldn't disgust me and my readers through awkward blackness, and you feel very angry?
Angry? That's right!
Because as long as the readers who have seriously read "Da Tie" know, it is precisely in these two seasons without a championship that Qiao has made a lot of serious preparations for the upcoming plot, and the gradual revelation of various foreshadowings.
And these, you summarized as a repeated plot of injecting water for two seasons, you say for the Qiao who has seriously read this part of the content, and feels good, and seriously written it, and feels that he can at least give himself a 6, what do we feel?
Skip these two seasons? Then okay, how will the future make trouble? How did McGrady grow up step by step in the sun? How did Xiao Yao and Ai establish a revolutionary friendship after repeated defeats? The stories of these stars of this era, as well as Su Feng's choice in the summer of 03, and how should James and others, who are stronger than the same period in the previous life, appear?
Finally, let me say one more thing, these two seasons are just to avoid water injection, so I will skip a lot of games that do not need to be described in detail. Even the combined number of words in these two seasons is only about 200,000, basically all of which are serving the plot, so do you know why there were so many little readers downstairs who dissed you at that time? This apprentice little friend?
Okay, back to the topic.
Another new question has come. Why did Qiao arrange for Su Feng to end these two seasons in a way of a lone hero after two consecutive championships?
First of all, here we have to start with arranging for Su Feng and Jordan to win the championship.
Because Su Feng's first championship was won with Jordan, so his second championship, Qiao must arrange for him to win it.
Yes, that's right, if you really say deliberate, then in fact, in my outline, Su Feng's second championship is what Qiao deliberately did.
Because from the writing point of view, the rhythm of winning, losing, winning, and losing will be better, and it will be more conducive to the expansion of the pavement. However, the writing of winning, winning, losing, and losing is not only difficult, but also tests the writing skills and plot layout skills. In short, in the design of this plot, while choosing to take a detour, I also directly added a difficulty buff to myself.
However, because Su Feng's first championship was won with Jordan, so he must win the championship in the second year, otherwise, people will definitely say that Su Feng also hugged Jordan's thigh to win the championship. And in this point, in terms of public opinion, I believe you reasonable readers should be clearer than me, right?
Therefore, after two consecutive championships, how to hone Su Feng's mentality and let him appear in the next team with a relatively mature mentality is what I need to arrange in these two seasons.
And this point, at least for now, the book "Da Tie" has successfully advanced another step towards its 20 seasons.
Because as I said, with the development of the plot of "Da Tie", the content that many readers care about has long changed from the so-called winning or not winning the championship, to what kind of ending will the stars of this era have under Su Feng's oppression.
"Da Tie" has changed from a simple YY novel of superstars to a YY novel of group portraits.
The appearance of each new character, and the future linkage between each old character, is the key to "Da Tie" being able to write until now and still maintain considerable tracking.
And this is also the progress and lessons I learned after "Wai Gua".
That is, I can't copy the routine of "Wai Gua" to "Da Tie", right? The thing about online novels, to put it bluntly, if you, the author, don't make progress, then the readers will make progress. Even if it's not nice to say, with more and more reasonable and handsome readers, if you don't make progress, then the readers will run away.
Therefore, after the plot of these two seasons is completely explained, the big linkage in the summer of 03 has been formed.
And next, Qiao only needs to patiently promote the plot, and can make "Da Tie" smoothly transition to the third part of this novel.
That is, those things that happened in that year.
In short, seeking common ground while reserving differences, if you choose to skip a lot of plots and then criticize my every plot, then you will definitely feel all kinds of unreasonable things. Because the interlocking plot, you will lose the control of rationality if you miss any part of it.
And after describing in a relatively reasonable way and unfolding Su Feng's plot, for Su Feng's next professional career... Just like I said before, the plot that you guessed, then can it still be called a plot?
You can all guess which season Su Feng will win the championship, and which season Su Feng will establish a dynasty, then how can Qiao bring you suspense?
It's not an exaggeration to say... As of now, in this chaotic universe carefully designed by Qiao, before Su Feng sends me the next plot, to be honest, I don't know how it will develop.
Because "Da Tie" is no longer a novel that is simply written for breaking records and winning championships. I said, it is a complete universe, it is a complete plane. And in Su Feng's plane, these characters and Su Feng's plot have slowly become its soul.
And this is what Qiao wants to write a basketball novel, a basketball novel that can completely block all my paths and the watery eggplant road next door.
Although, in writing books, I can improve in many aspects. But to be honest, in terms of plot arrangement, "Da Tie" is likely to become the only one in my basketball novel writing career.
Because this is a basketball novel that I racked my brains and stored enough materials for a full 35g (there are more videos) to lay out.
In order to write this book well, I consulted a lot of materials, literature, and read countless biographies and resumes of major stars.
Then presented to you through re-creation.
"Da Tie" is definitely not the best and coolest basketball novel, but it must be the best basketball novel that he has quietly written and written.
Therefore, before the summer plot of 03 arrives...
The little friends who want to bet hurry up. Otherwise, it's not recognized by Qiao and other reader bosses to say that you guessed it right afterwards!
Okay, thank you again and again to the handsome and reasonable genuine masters for giving Qiao the confidence, because it is your rationality that gives Qiao the motivation to create such a basketball novel that cannot be extremely distorted.
At the same time, it is also your patience that makes me look forward to Su Feng's next professional career even more.
When updating tomorrow, let's continue the story and get back to the topic.
Then, finally, continue to beg for monthly tickets! Subscriptions! Recommended tickets! All kinds of begging! Yingyingying!